I really like the way you're finishing these kind of drawing of yours, when the bottom of the character is disappearing behind.... a lot of beautiful.... things? ô.o I don't know how to describe it...DD: You're certainly thinking that all comments are common, now that you're that popular on DA °° poor little me who're just comming and talking too much >.>
I love how this added more detail to original character and demonstrated his role. It kinda reminds me Sebastian Michaelis (this one is a lot better). The design next to him looks fitting and increases his Victorian design, almost like a clock. It might look better than the original (no offense to anyone)!
Wah, you definitely didn't butcher him! He looks good with your style. The original one by Mirur is also good. I also notice you add horns and golden chain for some nice touches. It's good. Love the BG! ^_^ Keep going and good luck, NekoKirara! ^^V